Critique my marketing copy and fix what hurts conversions
A conversion-focused teardown of your copy with prioritized fixes and a rewritten version.
The prompt
Critique my marketing copy for conversion and show me how to fix it.
Copy: [PASTE]
Where it appears: [landing page / ad / email / product page / sales page]
Audience and awareness level: [e.g. "problem-aware, never heard of us"]
The one action I want: [e.g. "start a free trial"]
Traffic source: [where readers arrive from]
Score 1-5 and explain, quoting the copy:
1. Clarity: can a reader say what this is and who it's for in 5 seconds?
2. Relevance: does it match the awareness level and the promise that brought them here?
3. Specificity: concrete outcomes, numbers, and details vs. vague claims ("powerful", "seamless").
4. Proof: testimonials, data, credentials, demos; is every claim backed?
5. Objections: are the main reasons not to act handled?
6. Friction and CTA: one clear next step, low-risk framing, consistent CTA.
7. Readability: scannable, short sentences, benefit-led subheads.
Return:
- Scores table and the 3 changes most likely to lift conversions.
- A rewritten version with changes marked.
- 2 A/B test ideas with a hypothesis each.
Don't invent proof; where proof is needed, write [ADD PROOF: e.g. customer result].
Highlighted [brackets] are blanks to replace with your own details.
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What to fill in
- PASTE
- landing page / ad / email / product page / sales page
- e.g. "problem-aware, never heard of us"
- e.g. "start a free trial"
- where readers arrive from
- ADD PROOF: e.g. customer result
How this prompt is built
This prompt follows the Few-Shot structure (Few-shot prompting). A few-shot prompt includes one or more worked examples of the input and the output you want, so the model can copy the pattern instead of guessing it.
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